Friday, 20 November 2015

Gully surfing

           1.Instructions
2.surfing
3.heading back to class

1. Where are we going? It looked like we were going to slide down the slippery gully, with cardboard. We could not lie down on our bottoms or stand on or stand up but we can sit down This is going to be so fun! I don't  want the instructions.  I just want to do it.     
                                  
2.‘I don't like this!’ I cried. I pushed with all my might but   I could not do it. I felt angry and puffed. The cardboard box did not run.


3. As we carefully walk to my classroom. I think it can be better.  I was so scared that I wondered if I would knock my head. my legs are so tired. My ney is puffed. I could full asleep straight away.

By Eva





       
          



2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wow Eva! That is an amazing drwing you have added. I love the trees and the flower. Very original.

Anonymous said...

I like to be free in the wild